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Lucid Lullabies by ~PrimpDaddyJ:iconPrimpDaddyJ:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


Sweet little Clara,
What is your damage?
I see you have trouble
Falling
Asleep

Let me sing a story for you;
It may not be familiar
But try to follow along, and
Imagine,
For a moment

How would it sound?
And the hammer fell down
Against the rhythm of
A beating heart

Slowly beginning to drift away
You'll be overcome and gone
As the cracking lyrics
Break
Through all your worries

Give a sigh for the final relief
I'll whisper the last note in your ear
And the tune will resonate inside your head
Impaling your dreams
On lucid lullabies
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Author's Comments

I started to write this in my head yesterday while I was walking home.

This one is a bit more complex than what I normally write, but I'm very proud of the result. Enjoy!
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~Blink564:iconBlink564: May 1, 2008, 8:40:16 PM
I love it! Nice job!!

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~PrimpDaddyJ:iconPrimpDaddyJ: May 1, 2008, 8:54:56 PM
Thanks!

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~IvoryEpiphany:iconIvoryEpiphany: May 2, 2008, 7:13:03 AM
Lovely, very well done.

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Revels and abandon--death march to insanity.
~PrimpDaddyJ:iconPrimpDaddyJ: May 2, 2008, 2:50:19 PM
Thanks very much!

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~BadKiwi:iconBadKiwi: May 2, 2008, 4:09:27 PM
So, Jared. I've decided that we must have children. Because they would be amazingly intelligent and the best. poets. ever.

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A vision then appeared. It was Dumbledore, entombed in his cursed mummy armor, calling Harry from his Moon base.

"Harry, you must rock the fuck out."

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~PrimpDaddyJ:iconPrimpDaddyJ: May 2, 2008, 4:52:18 PM
We could be those extremely involved parents at the sports games, but it would be amateur poetry performances at coffee shops instead of sports. We would be so weird.

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~BadKiwi:iconBadKiwi: May 2, 2008, 5:09:28 PM
And awesome.

And our kids would have really shit-epic names. Like Amadeus. And Henry. Why don't we know anyone named Henry?

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A vision then appeared. It was Dumbledore, entombed in his cursed mummy armor, calling Harry from his Moon base.

"Harry, you must rock the fuck out."

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~Pictwii:iconPictwii: May 3, 2008, 7:36:17 PM
How beautiful! It just settels in on your heart. :heart:

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Life is what's there, just open your eyes and get on with your day.
~PrimpDaddyJ:iconPrimpDaddyJ: May 3, 2008, 9:18:27 PM
Thanks!

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